SHAKESPEARE COMPANY

• Bradley Best
  
• Chloe Espinoza
• Elise Brickey
• Emma Young
• Felicity Farnsworth
• Jase Perkins
• Kaitlyn Stuve
• Kambri Cherry
• Lilly Mae Stover
• Lily Bracken
• Lucille Henry
• Melanie Petersen
• Olivia Roberts
• Pashan Macurdy
• Peyton Horvath
• Tralee Jacobs

 
ALTERNATE

• Ana Merida
• Joey Allred
• Lillia Muir

FINALLY! I HAVE READ EVERYONE'S TRANSLATIONS AND SEEN ALL OF THE VIDEO UPLOADS THAT WERE TURNED IN.

MY INITIAL THOUGHTS:

• MOST OF THE PHRASING WAS VERY NICE
• MOST OF THE PACING WAS VERY NICE
• SOME OF THE PIECES WERE EXTREMELY FAST ... IF YOU GET A CHANCE LOOK THROUGH SOME OF THE OTHER SUBMITTED VIDEOS FOR WHAT WORKS AND WHAT DOESN'T WHEN IT COMES TO SPEED.
• MOST OF THE TACTICS WERE MINIMAL AND AT TIMES UNCLEAR.
• MOST OF THE STAKES WERE VERY LOW, TO THE POINT THAT I WONDERED IF IT WAS SIMPLY A NICE CONVERSATION WITH SOMEONE. RAISE. THE. STAKES. MAKE ME PULL YOU BACK.
• IF THERE WAS A WINNER FOR THIS ROUND OF WORK IT WOULD GO TO MELANIE. HER PACING WAS LOVELY AND HER THOUGHTS AND NEEDS WERE ON THE RIGHT TRACK. NOW WE JUST RAISE THE IMPORTANCE AND MAKE NOTICEABLE SHIFTS IN TACTICS.

NEXT STEPS:

• GET WITH YOUR PARTNER TO RUN LINES FOR AT LEAST 15 MINUTES 3 TIMES A WEEK.
• IF YOU'RE DOING A MONOLOGUE, GET WITH YOURSELF AND DO THE SAME.
• WRITE DOWN THE MAJOR POINTS OR SHIFTS THAT HAPPEN WITHIN THE SCENE AND MONOLOGUE, THEN: VIDEO YOURSELF DOING THE SCENE IN YOUR OWN WORDS HITTING THE MAJOR POINTS THAT YOUR CHARACTER IS FIGHTING FOR AND EVEN ADDING A FEW NEW ONES OF YOUR OWN.
• THEN, VIDEO THE ACTUAL SCENE RIGHT AFTER.

DUE BY THE END OF THE DAY ON SUNDAY OCTOBER 1ST:

• VIDEO OF SCENE OR MONOLOGUE IN YOUR OWN WORDS. (RAISE THE STAKES! MAKE IT LIFE OR DEATH!)
• VIDEO OF ACTUAL SCENE OR MONOLOGUE AS SHAKESPEARE WROTE IT. PLEASE DO NOT FILM THIS UNTIL AFTER YOU'VE FILMED IT IN YOUR OWN WORDS.

YOU GUYS ROCK!
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